the doctor

TOP SECRET: OPERATION-22 Blue is an architect who, after a business meeting in Manhattan, finds out about a secret plan that could alter the future of the world forever. Secret ...

Camilo the Magician Jade is a trained agent working undercover at an ice cream parlour looking to find more information about the criminal she is about to catch. She is ...

Wow SERIOUSLY? He posted the exact same thing on my post. Just saying. I have no idea still what he is trying to get at. Or she. Anyways, I like ...

I don't understand.... what are you trying to get at with all those questions? Are you trying to portray a sense of humour on me, or trying to get at ...

What was vivid for me was your narration. I loved it, your voice is like a breath of fresh air on a hot sunny day. You were very honest in ...

I would suggest having more narration. This is a little too short. You have a few sentences in between, which is good. But I think you could add a bit ...

I love your reference to Eragon. The fact that he is even mentioned here - awesome. And I love Arya. The whole entire story is pretty magical. Remove the periods, ...

Wow, I'm impressed. Sounds like something I would write when I was in grade 6. We seem to have lost our imagination through growing up. Not a great process, but ...

A big repetitive. Also every song has a message, and I'm not sure what the message in this one is. It's all very scrambled. You need to make sure the ...

This poem looks very personalized to you. I don't get most of it because I'm either really stupid, or it's just because I did a night owl turn today and ...

I really admire your sense of courage,and even so, you made a short story sound humoungous, and that is a great talent. I think the title says it all. First ...

I thought this was extremely well done, and you have a talent for going beyond expectations of a 16 year old. The first few paragraphs hooked me up right away, ...

I wrote parts of this a year ago, during Christmas Break. Continuing it again, finally recollected inspiration for it. This is Part 1 out of 4. Currently working on Part ...

Cool story, but I'm kind of bored. To be honest with you most science fiction bores me because of all the setting and all that. I'm not trying to be ...

The fact that you are one year younger than me...well, that makes me jealous :P Well, my first impression of your work is that you have a highly descriptive voice, ...